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Spencer looked up. He thought the man had gone. "No, none of those," he said. "Just plain, unemotional water,--_eau naturelle_,--straight from the pipe,--the microbe laden fluid that runs off London tiles most days. I haven't been outside the hotel during the last hour; but if you happen to pass the door I guess you'll see the kind of essence I mean dripping off umbrellas. If you don't keep it in the house, try to borrow a policeman's cape and shoot a quart into a decanter."
The quelled waiter hurried away and brought a carafe. Spencer professed to be so pleased with his rare intelligence that he gave him a shilling. Then he opened the envelop with the Leadville postmark. It contained a draft for 205 pounds, 15 shillings, 11 pence, and the accompanying letter from a firm of solicitors showed that the remittance of a thousand dollars was the moiety of the proceeds of a clean-up on certain tailings taken over by the purchasers of the Battle Mountain tunnel. The sum was not a large one; but it seemed to give its recipient such satisfaction that the movement of chairs on the floor of the big room just beneath failed to draw his attention from the lawyer's statement.
A woman's languid, well bred voice broke in on this apparently pleasant reverie.
"Shall we sit here, Helen?"
"Anywhere you like, dear. It is all the same to me. Thanks to you, I am passing an afternoon in wonderland. I find my surroundings so novel and entertaining that I should still be excited if you were to put me in the refrigerator."
The eager vivacity of the second speaker--the note of undiluted and almost childlike glee with which she acknowledged that a visit to a luxurious hotel was a red letter day in her life--caused the man to glance at the two young women who had unconsciously disturbed him. Evidently, they had just risen from luncheon in the restaurant, and meant to dispose themselves for a chat. It was equally clear that each word they uttered in an ordinary conversational tone must be audible to him. They were appropriating chairs which would place the plumes of their hats within a few inches of his feet. When seated, their faces would be hidden from him, save for a possible glimpse of a profile as one or other turned toward her companion. But for a few seconds he had a good view of both, and he was young enough to find the scrutiny to his liking.
At the first glance, the girl who was acting as hostess might be deemed the more attractive of the pair. She was tall, slender, charmingly dressed, and carried herself with an assured elegance that hinted of the stage. Spencer caught a glint of corn flower blue eyes beneath long lashes, and a woman would have deduced from their color the correct explanation of a blue sunshade, a blue straw hat, and a light cape of Myosotis blue silk that fell from shapely shoulders over a white lace gown.
The other girl,--she who answered to the name of Helen,--though nearly as tall and quite as graceful, was robed so simply in muslin that she might have provided an intentional contrast. In the man's esteem she lost nothing thereby. He appraised her by the fine contour of her oval face, the wealth of glossy brown hair that clustered under her hat, and the gleam of white teeth between lips of healthy redness. Again, had he looked through a woman's eyes, he would have seen how the difference between Bond-st. and Kilburn as shopping centers might be sharply accentuated. But that distinction did not trouble him. Beneath a cold exterior he had an artist's soul, and "Helen" met an ideal.
"Pretty as a peach!" he said to himself, and he continued to gaze at her. Indeed, for an instant he forgot himself, and it was not until she spoke again that he realized how utterly oblivious were both girls of his nearness.
"I suppose everybody who comes here is very rich," was her rather awe-stricken comment.
Her companion laughed. "How nice of you to put it that way! It makes me feel quite important. I lunch or dine or sup here often, and the direct inference is that I am rolling in wealth."
"Well, dear, you earn a great deal of money----"
"I get twenty pounds a week, and this frock I am wearing cost twenty-five. Really, Helen, you are the sweetest little goose I ever met. You live in London, but are not of it. You haven't grasped the first principle of social existence. If I dressed within my means, and never spent a sovereign until it was in my purse, I should not even earn the sovereign. I simply must mix with this crowd whether I can afford it or not."
"But surely you are paid for your art, not as a mannikin. You are almost in the front rank of musical comedy. I have seen you occasionally at the theater, and I thought you were the best dancer in the company."
"What about my singing?"
"You have a very agreeable and well trained voice."
"I'm afraid you are incorrigible. You ought to have said that I sang better than I danced, and the fib would have pleased me immensely; we women like to hear ourselves praised for accomplishments we don't possess. No, my dear, rule art out of the cast and substitute advertisement. Did you notice a dowdy creature who was lunching with two men on your right? She wore a brown Tussore silk and a turban--well, she writes the 'Pars About People' in 'The Daily Journal.' I'll bet you a pair of gloves that you will see something like this in to-morrow's paper: 'Lord Archie Beaumanoir entertained a party of friends at the Embankment Hotel yesterday. At the next table Miss Millicent Jaques, of the Wellington Theater, was lunching with a pretty girl whom I did not know. Miss Jaques wore an exquisite,' etc., etc. Fill in full details of my personal appearance, and you have the complete paragraph. The public, the stupid, addle-headed public, fatten on that sort of thing, and it keeps me going far more effectively than my feeble attempts to warble a couple of songs which you could sing far better if only you made up your mind to come on the stage. But there! After such unwonted candor I must have a smoke. You won't try a cigarette? Well, don't look so shocked. This isn't a church, you know."
Spencer, who had listened with interest to Miss Jaques's outspoken views, suddenly awoke to the fact that he was playing the part of an eavesdropper. He had all an American's chivalrous instincts where women were concerned, and his first impulse was to betake himself and his letters to his own room. Yet, when all was said and done, he was in a hotel; the girls were strangers, and likely to remain so; and it was their own affair if they chose to indulge in unguarded confidences. So he compromised with his scruples by pouring out a glass of water, replacing the decanter on its tray with some degree of noise. Then he struck an unnecessary match and applied it to his cigar before opening the first of the Denver letters.
As his glance was momentarily diverted, he did not grasp the essential fact that neither of the pair was disturbed by his well meant efforts. Millicent Jaques was lighting a cigarette, and this, to a woman, is an all absorbing achievement, while her friend was so new to her palatial surroundings that she had not the least notion of the existence of another open floor just above the level of her eyes.
"I don't know how in the world you manage to exist," went on the actress, tilting herself back in her chair to watch the smoke curling lazily upward. "What was it you said the other day when we met? You are some sort of secretary and amanuensis to a scientist? Does that mean typewriting? And what is the science?"
"Professor von Eulenberg is a well known man," was the quiet reply. "I type his essays and reports, it is true; but I also assist in his classification work, and it is very interesting."
"What does he classify?"
"Oh, how horrid! Do you ever see any?"
"I should find one enough. If it is a fair question, what does your professor pay you?"
"Thirty shillings a week. In his own way he is as poor as I am."
"And do you mean to tell me that you can live in those nice rooms you took me to, and dress decently on that sum?"
"I do, as a matter of fact; but I have a small pension, and I earn a little by writing titbits of scientific gossip for 'The Firefly.' Herr von Eulenberg helps. He translates interesting paragraphs from the foreign technical papers, and I jot them down, and by that means I pick up sufficient to buy an extra hat or wrap, and go to a theater or a concert. But I have to be careful, as my employer is absent each summer for two months. He goes abroad to hunt new specimens, and of course I am not paid then."
"And how do you pass your time?"
"I write a good deal. Some day I hope to get a story accepted by one of the magazines; but it is so hard for a beginner to find an opening."
"Yet when I offered to give you a start in the chorus of the best theater in London,--a thing, mind you, that thousands of girls are aching for,--you refused."
"I'm sorry, Millie dear; but I am not cut out for the stage. It does not appeal to me."
"Heigho! Tastes differ. Stick to your beetles, then, and marry your professor."
Helen laughed, with a fresh joyousness that was good to hear. "Herr von Eulenberg is blessed with an exceedingly stout wife and five very healthy children already," she cried.
"Then that settles it. You're mad, quite mad! Let us talk of something else. Do you ever have a holiday? Where are you going this year? I'm off to Champery when the theater closes."
"Champery,--in Switzerland, isn't it?"
"Ah, that is the dream of my life,--to see the everlasting snows; to climb those grand, solemn mountains; to cross the great passes that one reads of in the travel books. Now at last you have made me envious. Are you going alone? But of course that is a foolish question. You intend to join others from the theater, no doubt?"
"Well--er--something of the sort. I fear my enthusiasm will not carry me far on the lines that would appeal to you. I suppose you consider a short skirt, strong boots, a Tyrolese hat, and an alpenstock to be a sufficient rig-out, whereas my mountaineering costumes will fill five large trunks and three hat boxes. I'm afraid, Helen, we don't run on the same rails, as our American cousins say."
There was a little pause. Millicent's words, apparently tossed lightly into the air after a smoke spiral, had in them a touch of bitterness, it might be of self analysis. Her guest seemed to take thought before she answered:
"Perhaps the divergence is mainly in environment. And I have always inclined to the more serious side of life. Even when we were together in Brussels----"
"You? Serious? At Madam Berard's? I like that. Who was it that kicked the plaster off the dormitory wall higher than her head? Who put pepper in Signor Antonio's snuff box?"
Spencer saw the outer waves of a flush on Helen's cheeks. "This is exceedingly interesting," he thought; "but I cannot even persuade myself that I ought to listen any longer. Yet, if I rise now and walk away they will know I heard every word."
Nevertheless, he meant to go, at the risk of their embarrassment; but he waited for Helen's reply. She laughed, and the ripple of her mirth was as musical as her voice, whereas many women dowered with pleasantly modulated notes for ordinary conversation should be careful never to indulge in laughter, which is less controllable and therefore natural.
"That is the worst of having a past," she said. "Let me put it, then, that entomology as a pursuit sternly represses frivolousness."
"Does entomology mean beetles?"
"My dear, if you asked Herr von Eulenberg that question he would sate your curiosity with page extracts from one of his books. He has written a whole volume to prove that the only true entoma, or insects, are Condylopoda and Hexapoda, which means----"
"Cockroaches! Good gracious! To think of Helen Wynton, who once hit a Belgian boy very hard on the nose for being rude, wasting her life on such rubbish! And you actually seem to thrive on it. I do believe you are far happier than I."
"At present I am envying you that trip to Champery. Why cannot some fairy godmother call in at No. 5, Warburton Gardens, to-night and wave over my awed head a wand that shall scatter sleeping car tickets and banknotes galore, or at any rate sufficient thereof to take me to the Engadine and back?"
"Ah, the Engadine. I am not going there this year, I think."
"Haven't you planned your tour yet?"
"No--that is, not exactly."
"Do you know, that is one of my greatest pleasures. With a last year's Continental Bradshaw and a few tattered Baedekers I journey far afield. I know the times, the fares, and the stopping places of all the main routes from Calais and Boulogne. I could pass a creditable examination in most of the boat and train services by way of Ostend, Flushing, and the Hook of Holland. I assure you, Millie, when my ship does come home, or the glittering lady whom I have invoked deigns to visit my lodgings, I shall call a cab for Charing Cross or Victoria with the assurance of a seasoned traveler."
For some reason, Miss Jaques refused to share her friend's enthusiasm. "You are easily pleased," she said listlessly. "For my part, after one shuddering glance at the Channel, I try to deaden all sensation till I find myself dressing for dinner at the Ritz. I positively refuse to go beyond Paris the first day. Ah, bother! Here comes a man whom I wish to avoid. Let us be on the move before he sees us, which he cannot fail to do. Don't forget that I have a rehearsal at three. I haven't, really; but we must escape somehow."
Spencer, who had salved his conscience by endeavoring to read a technical letter on mining affairs, would be less than human if he did not lift his eyes then. It is odd how the sense of hearing, when left to its unfettered play by the absence of the disturbing influence of facial expression, can discriminate in its analysis of the subtler emotions. He was quite sure that Miss Jaques was startled, even annoyed, by the appearance of some person whom she did not expect to meet, and he surveyed the new arrival critically, perhaps with latent hostility.
He saw a corpulent, well dressed man standing at the foot of the stairs and looking around the spacious room. Obviously, he had not come from the restaurant. He carried his hat, gloves, and stick in his left hand. With his right hand he caressed his chin, and his glance wandered slowly over the little knots of people in the foyer. Beyond the fact that a large diamond sparkled on one of his plump fingers, and that his olive tinted face was curiously opposed to the whiteness of the uplifted hand, he differed in no essential from the hundreds of spick and span idlers who might be encountered at that hour in the west end of London. He had the physique and bearing of a man athletic in his youth but now over-indulgent. An astute tailor had managed to conceal the too rounded curves of the fourth decade by fashioning his garments skillfully. His coat fitted like a skin across his shoulders but hung loosely in front. The braid of a colored waistcoat was a marvel of suggestion in indicating a waist, and the same adept craftsmanship carried the eye in faultless lines to his verni boots. Judged by his profile, he was not ill looking. His features were regular, the mouth and chin strong, the forehead slightly rounded, and the nose gave the merest hint of Semitic origin. Taken altogether, he had the style of a polished man of the world, and Spencer smiled at the sudden fancy that seized him.
"I am attending the first act of a little play," he thought. "Helen and Millicent rise and move to center of stage; enter the conventional villain."
Miss Jaques was not mistaken when she said that her acquaintance would surely see her. She and Helen Wynton had not advanced a yard from their corner before the newcomer discovered them. He hastened to meet them, with the aspect of one equally surprised and delighted. His manners were courtly, and displayed great friendliness; but Spencer was quick to notice the air of interest with which his gaze rested on Helen. It was possible to see now that Millicent's unexpected friend had large, prominent dark eyes which lent animation and vivacity to a face otherwise heavy and coarse. It was impossible to hear all that was said, as the trio stood in the middle of the room and a couple of men passing up the stairs at the moment were talking loudly. But Spencer gathered that Millicent was explaining volubly how she and Miss Wynton had "dropped in here for luncheon by the merest chance," and was equally emphatic in the declaration that she was already overdue at the theater.
The man said something, and glanced again at Helen. Evidently, he asked for an introduction, which Miss Jaques gave with an affability that was eloquent of her powers as an actress. The unwished for cavalier was not to be shaken off. He walked with them up the stairs and crossed the entrance hall. Spencer, stuffing his letters into a pocket, strolled that way too, and saw this pirate in a morning coat bear off both girls in a capacious motor car.
Not to be balked of the denouement of the little comedy in real life for which he had provided the audience, the American grabbed the hall porter.
"Say," he said, "do you know that gentleman?"
"Yes, sir. That is Mr. Mark Bower."
Spencer beamed on the man as though he had just discovered that Mr. Mark Bower was his dearest friend.
"Well, now, if that isn't the queerest thing!" he said. "Is that Mark? He's just gone round to the Wellington Theater, I guess. How far is it from here?"
"Not a hundred yards, sir."
Off went Spencer, without his hat. He had intended to follow in a cab, but a sprint would be more effective over such a short distance. He crossed the Strand without heed to the traffic, turned to the right, and, to use his own phrase, "butted into a policeman" at the first corner.
"I'm on the hunt for the Wellington Theater," he explained.
"You needn't hunt much farther," said the constable good humoredly. "There it is, a little way up on the left."
At that instant Spencer saw Bower raise his hat to the two women. They hurried inside the theater, and their escort turned to reenter his motor. The American had learned what he wanted to know. Miss Jaques had shaken off her presumed admirer, and Miss Wynton had aided and abetted her in the deed.
"You don't say!" he exclaimed, gazing at the building admiringly. "It looks new. In fact the whole street has a kind of San Francisco-after-the-fire appearance."
"That's right, sir. It's not so long since some of the worst slums in London were pulled down to make way for it."
"It's fine; but I'm rather stuck on antiquities. I've seen plenty of last year's palaces on the other side. Have a drink, will you, when time's up?"
The policeman glanced surreptitiously at the half-crown which Spencer insinuated into his palm, and looked after the donor as he went back to the hotel.
"Well, I'm jiggered!" he said to himself. "I've often heard tell of the way some Americans see London; but I never came across a chap who rushed up in his bare head and took a squint at any place in that fashion. He seemed to have his wits about him too; but there must be a screw loose somewhere."
Louis Tracy's The Silent Barrier opens with a scene set in a London hotel, where the American Charles K. Spencer collects his mail. The prose immediately establishes a contrast between the efficient, cosmopolitan setting and the wild Alpine terrain that will soon dominate the narrative. Tracy's diction is precise: the letter clerk notes Spencer's 'clean cut features of a Greek statue' and 'brilliant, deep set, earnest eyes,' signaling a protagonist of action and thought. The dialogue is clipped and functional, reflecting the transactional nature of the hotel world.
Yet the novel's true voice emerges in the Alpine sections, where the language shifts to accommodate the physical and psychological pressures of the mountains. The guide Stampa's exclamation—'God in heaven! can it be that my prayer is answered at last?'—introduces a note of supernatural dread that undercuts the earlier realism. Tracy's authorial choices in diction and dialogue thus prepare the reader for a story where the barrier is both literal (a glacier) and figurative (a secret from the past).
Diction of the Alpine World
Tracy's vocabulary for the mountain landscape is specific and unromanticized. He uses terms like 'guxe' (a local wind), 'voyageur' (a traveler or guide), and 'col' (a mountain pass) without explanation, trusting the reader to infer meaning from context. This choice grounds the narrative in a particular geography—the Engadine region of Switzerland—and lends authenticity to the characters' expertise. The guides Stampa and Barth argue over the severity of the weather using technical language: 'a guxe was blowing up from the south,' says Barth, while Stampa dismisses the glacier as 'this child's glacier.' The contrast between their assessments creates tension, as the reader must weigh competing claims about the danger. Tracy avoids generic descriptions of 'mountains' or 'storms'; instead, he specifies 'thunder clouds,' 'sleet,' and 'lightning playing on the glacier,' making the environment a palpable force.
Dialogue as a Tool of Character
Tracy uses dialogue to reveal character traits and social hierarchies. Spencer's speech is direct and imperious: 'Right here, please, in No. 20 slot.' The clerk's deferential response—'I will attend to it'—underscores Spencer's wealth and status. In contrast, the guides speak in a mix of English, French, and German, reflecting their multilingual Alpine world. Stampa's voice is marked by exclamations and religious invocations: 'God in heaven!' and 'Ma foi!' (my faith). Bower, the English mountaineer, speaks with measured anxiety: 'There is peril—real peril—in delay.' Helen, the female protagonist, uses polite but firm language to mediate between the men: 'I am very much obliged to you for taking so much trouble.' Tracy's dialogue thus serves not only to advance the plot but to delineate class, nationality, and temperament.
The Structure of Suspense
Tracy builds suspense through a careful arrangement of information. The opening chapter, 'The Wish,' introduces Spencer's desire for adventure, but the fulfillment is delayed until Chapter II. The narrative then shifts to the Alpine setting, where the weather deteriorates gradually. Tracy uses the guides' conflicting opinions to create uncertainty: Barth insists the glacier is safe, while Stampa warns of the 'guxe.' The reader is privy to the characters' private thoughts—Spencer's disdain for Bower's caution, Helen's awareness of Bower's true motives—but not to the full backstory. The climax of the excerpt occurs when Stampa recognizes Bower's name: 'Marcus Bauer,' he hisses, a name that echoes the German form of 'Mark Bower.' This revelation is withheld from the reader, who must infer its significance from Stampa's reaction. Tracy's structural choice to delay explanation heightens the mystery.
Recurring Motifs: The Barrier and the Name
The novel's title, The Silent Barrier, is echoed in the epigraph from Rückert: 'That is the Barrier within which I am pent by the World on the one hand and Nature on the other.' Tracy reinforces this motif through the glacier itself, which serves as both a physical obstacle and a symbol of hidden truths. The name 'Bower' (or 'Bauer') becomes a second barrier: Stampa's recognition of it triggers a shift in the narrative from adventure to psychological drama. Tracy also uses the motif of the 'prayer'—Stampa's muttered 'my prayer is answered at last'—suggesting that the encounter is fated. These recurring elements give the story a cohesive symbolic structure, even as the plot remains incomplete in the excerpts.
Readers approaching The Silent Barrier should attend to Tracy's use of dialogue as a vehicle for character and conflict. The novel's power lies not in its plot twists but in the way language reveals hidden tensions—between guides, between guests, and between the past and present. The excerpts offer only a glimpse of the glacier crossing; the full novel likely develops the consequences of Stampa's recognition. Tracy's authorial choices reward close reading, particularly his integration of technical Alpine terminology and his manipulation of point of view.
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Patricia Robinson - 3 weeks ago
{'review_id': '258_neg', 'rating': 2, 'review_text': "Despite an interesting concept, 'The Silent Barrier' fails to deliver. The plot is predictable, and the characters are one-dimensional. The dialogue feels forced, and the attempts at suspense fall flat. The book would have benefited from tighter editing and more nuanced storytelling. I struggled to stay engaged and ultimately felt disappointed by the shallow execution."} -
Bonnie Fry - 2 weeks ago
{'review_id': '258_pos', 'rating': 5, 'review_text': "The Silent Barrier is a masterfully crafted thriller that keeps you on the edge of your seat from start to finish. The author's vivid descriptions of the remote wilderness create an atmospheric setting that enhances the suspense. The characters are deeply developed, and the plot twists are both surprising and satisfying. I couldn't put it down and found myself thinking about it long after the final page. A must-read for fans of psychological suspense."} -
Joel Amber Murray - 2 weeks ago
{'review_id': '258_neu', 'rating': 3, 'review_text': "The Silent Barrier has an intriguing premise and strong opening, but the pacing slows down in the middle. The protagonist's internal monologue becomes repetitive, which detracts from the overall tension. However, the climactic resolution is well-executed and redeems the slower sections. If you can push through the lulls, it's a decent read, but not as gripping as I had hoped."}
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